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How to Get a Literary Agent

You have about the same odds of getting published as getting struck by lightning…

…so let’s get those numbers up and go over six things to do to get a literary agent!

During the last stream, a subscriber requested that we go over how to get a literary agent.

Watch what we did here, or scroll down for highlights.

How to Get a Literary Agent

  • If you want to have your novel traditionally published, the best way to do that is through a literary agent
  • Agents act as a middleman between you and publishers: they send your manuscript to editors at publishing houses, advocate for it to be published, and take a percent of your royalties
  • Getting an agent isn’t easy, and there’s a lot of luck involved, but there are six things you can do to increase your luck
  • So let’s go over them one by one, then go through them together with a made up novel of our own!

#1. Finish the novel and edit it until it shines

  • This is the most important part! Don’t even think about an agent until you have a finished book
  • But being finished isn’t enough: show it to your writing group, get feedback, and edit it
  • Only when several different people tell you they love it and want more are you ready to move on

#2. Write a query letter and a one-page synopsis of your novel

  • A query letter is the e-mail that you will send to agents
  • It doesn’t need to be fancy, but it does need to be GOOD, since it will be the first impression of your writing
  • Query letters typically look like this:
    • Greeting the agent by name
    • Giving your book’s title, genre, audience, word count
    • A 2-3 paragraph back-of-the-book summary (hook then sizzle, ~200 words)
    • Your bio and any relevant writing experience
    • Closing
  • Take a look here at a real query letter that landed its writer an agent.
  • If your bio feels sparse, try writing some short stories and get those published, or taking small writing jobs to pad it out
  • Many agents will also ask for a synopsis, which is typically a 1 page summary of your entire book
  • Think of it as a Wikipedia summary, telling everything that happens from beginning to end
  • If you can’t fit the synopsis on 1 page, then there’s a good chance you still need to revise your book

#3. Make a database of around 40-50 agents who represent novels in your audience/genre

  • Now it’s time to find the agents to send your manuscript to
  • Basically you want to search for agents who represent books in your genre/audience
  • There are many places you can search for them, here are some I recommend:

https://agentquery.com
Has some outdated info but is a huge resource

https://querytracker.net
Premium membership makes searching easier but free works too

https://manuscriptwishlist.com
Has both agents and publishing editors so be careful

  • Don’t worry if you get 100 or more agents in your search, many won’t end up making your list
  • The next step sucks: you have to go through them one by one, check out their personal websites, and compile the info
  • Here’s an example of what I create during this process, imagining I wrote a YA book about a family-lineage horror story that takes place in Virginia:
Name URL Notes Interest Level Sent
On?
Rejected
On?
Mary Poppins magicalliterary.com/
agents/marypoppins
Likes YA with a focus on family, also interested in Southern horror 4 6/21
Jane Banks hatandribbon.com/
agentlist
Does YA, lists horror as a favorite movie genre 3 6/1 6/18
Van
Dyke
chimneysweeyplit.com/
agents/vdyke
Likes family-lineage stories 2 6/21
Crab Dongs custycrusteaceans.com/
dongs
Doesn’t specify what they do 1 6/1 6/5
  • The interest level is a scale of 1 to 4: 4 being a perfect match, 3 being great, 2 being okay, and 1 being no real connection
  • It’s good to organize the agents by interest level, for a reason we’ll get to next

#4. Send out queries to the agents in your database in batches

  • Once you have somewhere around 20-50 agents in your database, you’re ready to start sending
  • I recommend sending out queries in batches of 5-10, with a good spread of all interest levels (1s to 4s), that way if you mess something up or you need to revise something, you don’t waste all of your 4s and 3s and can try them later with something new
  • Wait at least two weeks between batches and see what the response is like: if you get no requests, then revise; if you do get a request, then you’re likely good to keep sending out more
  • Lastly, always be sure to double check the agent’s personal requirements for querying: some want 5 sample pages, some want 20, some want none, and some have other requests too

#5. Research contests and digital events where agents will be present and submit your work

  • There are contests running throughout the year that authors can submit to, where agents will look over a bunch of submissions at once and request more if they’re interested
  • The most popular one is Pitch Wars, which happens several times a year: https://pitchwars.org/ 
  • There are plenty of others, like Nightmare on Query Street, which was the contest that got my agent
  • So get on Twitter and follow some literary agents so you’ll know when contests are happening!

#6. Prepare to feel pain like you have never known

  • You will get rejected A LOT and it will hurt A LOT, but remember that’s perfectly normal and you are NOT alone at all: every single traditionally published author has gone through this
  • The odds are against you: agents get an average of 200 queries per week and only take on about 4 new clients per year, for odds of 0.04% (about the same as being struck by lightning)
  • BUT! The good news is that if you do the things on this list, and if you have a killer story, you can increase that percent
  • You won’t get hit by lighting by staying indoors, and you won’t get an agent by never trying, so douse yourself in water, climb to the top of a tall building, and get struck by literary lightning!

After that, chat voted that we come up with a novel together and write a query letter for it, then find some agents who could represent it.

Here’s what we came up with:

Dear [agent’s name],

I’m currently seeking representation for my middle-grade fantasy novel, FRAGMENTS. Given your interest in [whatever], I thought it might be a good fit for your list.

Stewart has always come off to others as cold, not because he wants to, but because of his heart made of glass. In a world where everyone else is born with hearts of fluffy clouds, warm sun rays, or shimmering gold, Stewart was cursed to be born with the most fragile muscle possible.

Unwilling to take any emotional risks for fear of shattering, Stewart has lived a life of solitude, until he saves a puppy named Tink from drowning in icy water. Tink’s unconditional love helps Stewart to feel the same kind of joy that the others do, helping to seal the cracks that had formed in his glass over the years.

So when Stewart wakes up one morning to find Tink kidnapped, he has to make a choice: stay home and play it safe like he has all his life, or risk his delicate heart and go on an adventure normally reserved for fire- and iron-hearts.

Stewart makes his choice, encountering dangers that could shatter him, including finding out why he was cursed with such a vulnerable heart.

FRAGMENTS is complete at 65,000 words. The manuscript is available upon request. Thank you for your time and consideration!

Best,
ScottWritesStuff Twitch Chat

Be sure to check out the video to see how we went about finding some agents who could represent our amazing book.

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