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Author Slowly Loses Mind Reading “Fifty Shades of Grey”

It’s time.

We’ve been training long and hard for this moment.

Let’s open up the first chapter of Fifty Shades of Grey, then try to stitch it back together healthier than before!

During the last stream, we read the first chapter of Fifty Shades of Grey and offered writing advice to it.

Watch the edited video here.

I expected the first chapter to be bad, but what we got was… something indescribable. Be sure to check out the video if you want to see a happy, starry-eyed man slowly have his soul sucked away by words on a page.

If you want to join us and help write a story by trolling in chat, or share your own writing for feedback, then we’d love to have you join us on Twitch.

And you missed the stream, you can still watch them on the YouTube channel or watch the full stream reruns.

Hope to see you next time, friend!Featured image: Flickr/Mike Mozart

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